That's plenty of footage for a 2 min 45 second piece. Good job sifting through it all, and the end result looks nice. To add more intrigue I wanted to see more tension: What problems does he encounter? What happens if the guitar isn't finished in time? What if he slips and ruins a vital detail? Where's the tension and what's at stake? What's the story? It isn't someone talking about how making a guitar is nice.