August 16, 2018 at 12:01AM

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2 directors cuts - feedback desired!

Just sharing 2 directors cut that I made with my wife Isabella:
We also produced the shorts.

Lote
Lote from Fiji starts a new life in Japan playing Rugby 7.
https://vimeo.com/285078450

Jonas
Jonas shares his story of almost drowning.
https://vimeo.com/277957759

Looking forward on feedback.

best
Felix

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I found both were well shot but boring. Your Fiji dialogue was not understandable. Saw no story or purpose in either one of them. Cuts were too quick to get a foundation of what you were trying to say.

Just one opinion. Keep trying.

June 4, 2020 at 10:37PM, Edited June 4, 10:37PM

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William Scherer
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