July 19, 2015 at 2:56PM

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Critique My Short

Just finished my first short. Took me forever to do it, shot when purchased my Canon 60D and only had it for a few months and was just starting to learn how to use cameras in general. Take a look, let me know what you think, where are the big areas I need to improve?

Thanks

https://youtu.be/KRbPZQOQHlM

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Kyle, congrats on shooting a short! Dont stop there, shoot another one! Meanwhile -- good job!

July 23, 2015 at 4:18PM, Edited July 23, 4:18PM

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Alex Zakrividoroga
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Hey, good job with the short! Nice attempt. Keep making more. And do check out our short movie as well. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2P8NsDx_BO8

April 16, 2016 at 2:52AM

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nandhu manoj
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The spatial aspect of the car sounds are mostly very good. Except for that puddle splash
at 1:25, which was way too loud to the point of almost seeming like you were going for
comic effect.

The actor in the trench coat perhaps was looking around a bit too much while he was
walking out into that field. I would assume that kind of a character would be much more
methodical and discreet. Or is that the reason for the twist ending?

I liked the bleached out look. I felt like it fit with the subject matter.

April 17, 2016 at 11:09PM, Edited April 17, 11:10PM

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Sean Bokenkamp
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