November 25, 2015 at 1:33PM, Edited November 25, 1:34PM

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Critique on my short film

I'm currently a senior in high school and i recently took part in a local 48 hour film festival. I'm looking to people here because i need a critical look at the final product, which is difficult to get from people i know. It was completely shot within 48 hours, but this version is my final release version which is heavily touched up from what i could do in the 48 hours, along with a added scene. We had to use the character name Boo, and the line "you make me want to shout". There are some problems that i am already well aware of, such as some questionable acting and pacing. But i would love it if you guys could let me know what you think. Thanks :) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rlJo-qMhYOQ

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