January 18, 2017 at 3:10AM, Edited January 18, 3:15AM

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Critique my Short Film!

Hey guys,

I'm a first year Film student. Me and two others made this film for our end of term assessment in 2 evenings with zero budget. Would love to know what you think and where we could improve!

Thank you!

https://vimeo.com/194336123?ref=fb-share&1

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It sounds like a great movie, I just wish I could see it.

January 18, 2017 at 8:43AM, Edited January 18, 8:45AM

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Too dark.

January 18, 2017 at 4:10PM

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