May 30, 2015 at 2:17PM, Edited May 30, 2:19PM

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Feedback on my short film?

Hey everyone,

I am very curious to see the feedback this community may have to my short film, "Only One".

It was made for the Campus Movie Festival at my college, St. John's University. There were a lot of limitations, but I think it came out good from what we had to deal with while shooting. I decided to make it a one-take film to see if I could challenge myself in creating something very interesting. Choreographing and preparation were key that night.

It won Best Actor and was sent to the Hollywood portion of the competition, but sadly didn't win.

I would like to get some feedback from anyone about the cinematography, writing, acting, directing, etc.

Here is my film, "Only One":
https://vimeo.com/129070714

Enjoy!

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I really enjoyed the story, and twist. With it being one long take, I can only image how many times you may have ran through it to get the timing right. The acting was good, I really enjoyed the main character.

My only criticism is about the lighting. Since it was choreographed, lighting could have been planned so the 3 main areas were slightly lit more interestingly.

Overall still a pretty good short. Keep them coming!

June 1, 2015 at 8:27AM, Edited June 1, 8:28AM

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Matt Clark
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Thank you so much for your feedback! I really appreciate it. I actually do have some new films coming up soon, so be on the lookout for those!

June 5, 2015 at 11:20PM

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Ryan DeForeest
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