January 17, 2017 at 12:16PM
Feedback on my short film concept.
Hello everyone, I have to write the script for a 10 minute short for my Intro to screenwriting class, and I would love your feedback on my idea.
It's about a retired hitman whose 8 year old daughter has a terminal disease which can only be cured with a very expensive surgery that he can`t afford.
After months of trying to collect the money he gets a call from his old employer who tells him he will cover all medical expenses if he takes on last mission, in which the victim is his life-long best friend. So he has to make the choice to either murder his best and only friend and save his daughter or refuse to do it and most likely seal his daughters fate