July 25, 2016 at 8:44AM, Edited July 25, 8:45AM

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I've just created my first 'proper' short - please critique!

Hi,

I've just created my first real/serious short, thinking about colour, sound, composition etc. It would be really helpful if you could critique it!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7Or4-q79yOk

Thanks

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Nice, well done!

If you give credits don't forget to give credits to the music!

July 25, 2016 at 12:24PM

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Cary Knoop
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Yes, of course, I completely forgot! Thanks!

July 25, 2016 at 3:50PM

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Ka Jun Cheng
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I really like the video aspect but I think the voice is too low in the audio mix.

September 24, 2016 at 9:22PM

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