April 24, 2015 at 1:37PM

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Looking For Feedback On Short Film

Hi Everybody! I've been working on this short film for a while now, and finally have my first edit. I was wondering if some of you could take a look and give me some feedback/constructive criticism on how I could improve it.

https://youtu.be/DFG2AxdEBLI

Thank you in advance!

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I left my thoughts under the video for you :)

April 25, 2015 at 3:13PM

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Trae Dukes
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Thank you for the kind words! It really means a lot! Thought it was funny how you said you thought it could go on for another hour as I kept worrying it was going to end up far too long haha.

April 25, 2015 at 6:26PM

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Gareth O'Dalaigh
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I lik you kept his character so mysterious. I felt like I had no choice but to keep watching. As if I wanted to know about him just as much as she did

April 25, 2015 at 10:38PM

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Trae Dukes
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Thank you! That's so nice to hear! It was definitely a balance of trying to find the right amount so you were interested, and not bored by him.

April 26, 2015 at 9:50AM, Edited April 26, 9:50AM

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