April 24, 2015 at 1:37PM
Looking For Feedback On Short Film
Hi Everybody! I've been working on this short film for a while now, and finally have my first edit. I was wondering if some of you could take a look and give me some feedback/constructive criticism on how I could improve it.
Thank you in advance!
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I left my thoughts under the video for you :)
April 25, 2015 at 3:13PM
Thank you for the kind words! It really means a lot! Thought it was funny how you said you thought it could go on for another hour as I kept worrying it was going to end up far too long haha.
April 25, 2015 at 6:26PM
I lik you kept his character so mysterious. I felt like I had no choice but to keep watching. As if I wanted to know about him just as much as she did
April 25, 2015 at 10:38PM
Thank you! That's so nice to hear! It was definitely a balance of trying to find the right amount so you were interested, and not bored by him.
April 26, 2015 at 9:50AM, Edited April 26, 9:50AM
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