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it's called 'series'
here's the first episode (series: movie): https://vimeo.com/107545584
already hard at work on episode 2!
would love some feedback!
I watched. What's your objetive with the serie? the imagen it's ok but the story is not clear (maybe i am wrong, it's just an opinion)
October 17, 2014 at 3:01AM, Edited October 17, 3:01AM
for the first episode i just wanted to introduce the characters, what their morning routine is like etc.
the second episode (which im working on now) i hope will have a stronger storyline
October 17, 2014 at 6:31AM
Personally I felt it was slow. I started to become impatient after 25 seconds of black and really only stayed with it until the 1min mark. Not sure I would come back for another episode.
I'd recommend tightening it up and put the storyline in the first episode. Hope that helps!
October 20, 2014 at 11:14PM