October 15, 2014 at 11:48AM

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my new web series

it's called 'series'

here's the first episode (series: movie): https://vimeo.com/107545584

already hard at work on episode 2!

would love some feedback!

thanks!

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I watched. What's your objetive with the serie? the imagen it's ok but the story is not clear (maybe i am wrong, it's just an opinion)

October 17, 2014 at 6:01AM, Edited October 17, 6:01AM

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Ragüel Cremades
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for the first episode i just wanted to introduce the characters, what their morning routine is like etc.

the second episode (which im working on now) i hope will have a stronger storyline

October 17, 2014 at 9:31AM

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Personally I felt it was slow. I started to become impatient after 25 seconds of black and really only stayed with it until the 1min mark. Not sure I would come back for another episode.

I'd recommend tightening it up and put the storyline in the first episode. Hope that helps!

October 21, 2014 at 2:14AM

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Daniel Finley
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