August 13, 2016 at 10:48PM

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Quick critique on a video i made

I just made this short video because i was bored. i was wondering if you guys could give me some advice on how this video could have made and edited better.
https://youtu.be/yoN9gjZlWKE

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Sometimes the best cure for boredom is to actually not be so lazy. I'm not critiquing your video per se, but your appeal for critique does not in any way prepare the viewer either for the 30 second video itself, nor what you were intending to do.

As 30 second videos go, it was perfect, just the way that every individual snowflake is perfect, just by being itself. Any single change to the editing, composition, lighting, etc., would change it into a completely different perfect (albeit perfectly arbitrarily) little snowflake.

Now, if there were more information about what you were trying to get your movie to say, to mean, to express, etc., i.e., a snowflake with a *purpose*, a snowflake with a *mission*, then perhaps readers of this board could give you constructive criticism about that.

August 15, 2016 at 5:41AM

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