May 17, 2017 at 4:19PM

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Released a short online this week - Would love to share it with you!

Wrote, produced, acted, and edited a short film last year called ALISON that we released on Monday. Would love thoughts and feedback from the filmmaker community, as well as any advice you have on finding a larger audience on the internet!

Many thanks! I hope you enjoy.

https://vimeo.com/213100067

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It is a great little film. Maybe some scenes could have been a little shorter and still had the same impact. I thought it was a little slow moving in parts. In a few places I was thinking, "OK I get it already." But overall excellent. Image quality, lighting, blocking, acting - all just great. You are very talented.

May 20, 2017 at 11:24PM, Edited May 20, 11:24PM

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Hi Jessica,
I think it is wonderfully shot. I agree with Elliot thoughts on slow moving.
But besides that, it is beautiful, the concept is different, good compositions and very properly lit scenes.
Good Job Jessica.

P.S I saw your film before I read this forum.

May 29, 2017 at 1:23AM

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Dilip Suthar
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