November 23, 2016 at 9:10AM

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Short Film Feedback

I made this short film early this year and was just looking for some feedback on it. It's the first short film I made It is about 8 minutes long. Here is the link.

https://youtu.be/QXNsH6zDPXA
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Not bad. I wanted to know more about the main character, like what led to what we saw at the beginning. Still, you held my attention which I admit is hard to do.
Some constructive criticism: work on lighting to get the look you want so you don't have to gain-up the camera or rescue shadow detail with processing. Lighting is one of the hardest things to do and many inexpensive cameras require tons of it. I just did a video that needed almost 3,000 Watts to sufficiently light a small living room! Your sound is also a bit on the hot side and the mic or mic placement you used isn't ideal. The overall mix is decent though.
Keep up with it man, you have promise.

November 23, 2016 at 8:29PM

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