May 22, 2016 at 9:48PM, Edited May 22, 9:52PM


Short Film Review

Hello! I am an aspiring filmmaker, and graduating high school this year. I made a short film for my video production class this year, and I would like as much feedback as possible. Please watch the short film and if you have any, pointers are wonderful. I am open to tips and tricks and any sort of constructive criticism from how to improve the story, to how to pull off the camera angles of a scene better or improve my coverage, or how to do lighting better.

Here is a link to the film:

I myself have a lot of problems with the film (naturally) especially in terms of location. I wish we actually had a budget to work with and could rent out a studio for a couple of the interior scenes, but sadly as high school seniors, we did not. Either way, constructive criticism, tips and tricks would help greatly!

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