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A little doc I directed and edited.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C9kaugejsSQ
I love some of the beautiful moving shots - good cine. The film is too long and its ambient noise soundtrack is too harsh for far too long. Artful and unique though!
October 5, 2014 at 7:18PM
Thank you for watching :)
October 6, 2014 at 8:50PM
I agree with J Cam the ambient sound is a little much through out the whole thing. It felt like I was in a horror movie. I feel something like this should have music for the soundtrack. That said it looks great. the cinematography made up for the sound! the moving shots are really well done the train in particular.
October 7, 2014 at 6:52PM
I think the tempo of the movie could also pick up a bit.. I mean it is 16 minutes long but it's just showing some art-making?
Alot of nice shots and stuff, and the sound design was cool but didn't really match the video at all times. I would consider make a shorter version, it would make it alot more viewer-friendly.
October 8, 2014 at 6:23AM
Yeah, I agree it is not so viewer friendly, but it wasn't meant to.
Anyway, making a shorter version, cutting a little beetwen 3:50 and 5:56 is a suggestion I shall keep :)
October 13, 2014 at 9:44AM