February 8, 2015 at 11:32AM

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Feedback Wanted - Teaser Trailer

Hello All

I am have put together a 30sec teaser for a short film I have made and I would really appreciate it if the No Film School community could give me some general feedback on the trailer.

The short film if going to be featured in a magazine article which is published on the 25th Feb and I would like to put out the teaser at the same time to tie in with it.

Any comments and suggestions you have would be much appreciated.

https://vimeo.com/119000097
p\w - Bava

Many Thanks
Roger

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Try to let the audience in on the story more. I feel like this teaser is just a few shots of a woman calling/watching tv. Honestly, there's nothing in this teaser making me want to watch te full shortfilm.

What's does this woman want? What's her purpose? Try to implement the answers of these questions in your teaser. And at the end of watching the teaser the audience should have the urge to know if she'll make her goal. That's what drives an audience to watch a full movie.

Look at some teasers on YouTube and try to figure out what it is in that teaser that makes you want to watch the full movie.

Good luck!

February 8, 2015 at 12:30PM

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Robin van Bussel
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