August 29, 2016 at 9:17PM

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Horror Critique, please.

https://vimeo.com/180629205

I would like some filmmakers that's interested in the horror genre to look at this and critique it for me. What would you have done different with little to no money for the project? Constructive criticism is always welcomed as I am trying to shoot horror films (shorts now, features later) that would scare the masses without the false jump scares. Please keep in mind that I don't have big budgets for shoots!! Thanks.

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Hi Reggie,
i liked it, nice idea, good shooting and editing.
Just a two suggest, like viewer first, like director later :-D
you could build a bit more climax with longer waiting ( i mean 30 seconds, no more), a bit more waiting at phone... and in the end i saw too much (too much time) the face of guy, i like a lot the dark shape behind him, give me a lots of fear, until i can see too much the face of guy. You could close more the door to give the viewer the idea that she could save herself ... until he grab her.
anyway, for a low budget it's a great work, congratulation, i like it.

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