October 19, 2014 at 12:12AM

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I'd love some feedback on my trailer.

We just wrapped our first feature, a microbudget modern western/drama. What kinds of constructive criticisms do you have for the trailer?

https://vimeo.com/108954102

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Sweet Trailer dude. it made me wanna check it out.

October 19, 2014 at 8:20PM

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Michael Militscher
Director / Commercial Producer
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Thanks Michael!

Jake the film guy Keenum

October 19, 2014 at 10:53PM

Nice!!!!!! i love it. :D

October 20, 2014 at 3:13AM

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Ragüel Cremades
Film producer and director
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Thanks Raguel!

Jake the film guy Keenum

October 20, 2014 at 4:17PM

Liked the trailer man. Only thing I would say is I was invested at around the :50 - :55 mark... the rest felt like giving away too much.

October 29, 2014 at 3:06AM

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Isaac Horvat
Director/Cameraman/Independent Film Maker/Film Buff
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So too long you say? Thank you! I have yet to field that kind of feedback. Thanks Isaac!

Jake the film guy Keenum

October 29, 2014 at 8:45PM

I think you could cut it much shorter. Less is more.

You could have the pace pickup a bit more toward the end also to build some tension, the pacing feels kind of even throughout.

Good luck!

January 16, 2015 at 11:23PM

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