January 9, 2017 at 4:08AM

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kindly check out my work and critic.

Hi folks , l shot my first music video.
I directed, dp, edited and got my close friend to handle the production.
We hope to do more and improve.

https://vimeo.com/196719405
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I don't like the grading and some of the shots are a little TOO dark, but aside from that, great job I say.

January 9, 2017 at 11:42AM, Edited January 9, 11:43AM

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I got the same remarks as Stephen. Keep up the great work.

January 10, 2017 at 2:45AM

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Herman Delgado
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there are inconsistencies in the grades in each scene, but its fixable. i like the art direction i feel the video fit the music well. the shots are a little dark, but if you were trying to achieve the "just showing one side of the face look" i felt it works, but a kicker on the left side of their faces just to bring up the exposure would look better. Think you did a really good job with the lens selection. Keep up the great work!

January 11, 2017 at 11:52AM

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Mark K.
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