January 21, 2017 at 5:25PM


Some feedback on my film?

For my video productions final I had to create a 10 shot silent--no dialogue--short film. It also had to be under 3 minutes. Can someone view it and give me some feedback?
Here it is:

How was it? Was it understandable? Did I execute my ideas effectively?

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Nicely done and fun. There's a few nit picks though. The white balance changes from shot to shot. You need more light so you can stop down the lens a little. Use a tripod more, DSLRs don't do hand-held well.
I'm reminded of an essay I wrote about writing a last-minute essay, pulling topics out of the air, filling space with needless filler etc. I got a B. :p

January 23, 2017 at 7:12AM, Edited January 23, 7:12AM


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