It's been a while, but I've tired to take some of what you suggested and tired to apply.

https://vimeo.com/128944320

I think my use of camera angles really lacks as an influencing my story. How could I improve upon that aspect of the film?

Thank you! That was some really good advice, I see where the dialogue shouldn't so obviously state a moral. To be a better filmmaker and writer, my films have to undertake a dramatic change for the better. I agree with your thoughts.