Biggest gripe for me here is almost zero b-roll footage.
This is all to personal taste but for me I prefer a 60/40 Rap performance to B-roll (cut away)
Especially cos its a very in your face artist, show some close ups of the crew, a dog on a leash etc... all cliche but those are just examples.
Having b-roll footage easily makes the viewer not lose interest.
I like to study rap videos to see what really makes them tick.
Try that too.
All in all, if that really is your first music video, you did superb.
Biggest gripe for me here is almost zero b-roll footage.
This is all to personal taste but for me I prefer a 60/40 Rap performance to B-roll (cut away)
Especially cos its a very in your face artist, show some close ups of the crew, a dog on a leash etc... all cliche but those are just examples.
Having b-roll footage easily makes the viewer not lose interest.
I like to study rap videos to see what really makes them tick.
Try that too.
All in all, if that really is your first music video, you did superb.