What is the perfect movie that s the same it has to touch you i think.
The Book Of Bunny Suicides and bojack horseman are also funny suicide stories.
1 advise only to use cross dissolve if you really need it for a well chosen effect. There is nothing more ugly than using across dissolves on everything without thinking it true or to mask bad cuts. Most of the times you can use jump cuts or other smart choices instead of using a disolve.
If it is not for critical colour grading I want sunlight, it is a place where you have to spend much of your time and sunlight keeps your biological clock ticking and keeps you happy :). Try to avoid direct sunlight at your screen. For coulour grading you then can close te blinds.
i found it nicely shot and edited good idea staring with the problem :). A little bit of comment doh i probably would ad some titles on what you were doing while making the charging station so the explanaition about how you do it you can cut away. The making of the station i find a little bit too flashy (not much just a bit). At the end i would just like to see why you needed it and how you use it and the benefit of it. Otherwise nicely done good idea thumbs up.