I just watched and enjoyed the webisode. Lots of good advice here. i think in particular Adrian Neely gave you good advice in building on the views you had with the first episode by producing the second. I realize some time has elapsed now but i hope you continue. If not with this project then another. You showed great promise with this first prodution. As others have mentioned good production values. I have done quite a bit of wedding and event videography and have dabbled with some short scripted projects and it is much harder than I imagined. Pacing in particular can be tricky.