Thank you. That really helped a lot and I appreciate the constructive criticism. i feel the same way about the computer lab scene and i wanted to reshoot it with better light but we didnt have enough time. the music definitely is overpowering and i realize now its because i was listening to it through headphones. but thanks for the music compliment. i thought the fast up beat music would work great to influence the hustlin in it. i manage to put together a few samples on garage band that are scored throughout. i do want to learn more about the audio portion. do you think lowering the audio recorder would reduce some of the background noise? if not what are some stragedies i can start on to fix this problem? i think i am most proud of the editing. i tried my best to cut it so it was a forward driven rhythm to it at the same time try to keep it as natural as possible so it wont disorientate the audience. i also agree about the acting/directing part. next project i plan to stick to one or the other. unfortunately i didnt really have the option with this project since they is only four of us in the class and every one was busy doing there part. i cant thank you enough for taking the time out of your day to write so extensively. i love film so much. every aspect of it i appreciate and want to get better at and keep learning more.
thanks again stephen!!