June 28, 2016 at 10:49AM

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Newest short film! Please critique and vote!

Hey everyone!
Here is a film that my sister and I have been working on. We made it for My Røde Reel 2016 and we're super proud of our team and the final product. We know it's not perfect though and would definitely appreciate your critiques. But since it's also the People's Choice voting phase we'd love your votes as well!

http://www.rode.com/myrodereel/watch/entry/2158

We filmed it over 2 days in the Springfield, MO area. The camera was a Sony A7s (Mark 1) using a Helios 44-2 for the flashback scene and the Schneider Super Cinelux 2x anamorphic with an Olympus F Zuiko 50mm f1.8 and Rokinon 85mm f1.4 as taking lenses. For sound we used a Rode NTG2 with Tascam DR 60D Mk2, and Rode Videomic/Video Micro for on camera audio.

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Alright, you posted. I'll bite and try to give you constructive criticism. Keep in mind, I have no work of my own to show... so... there's that.

1. The early couch scene.... SOOO much blank white wall. I get the whole "not there" vibe. But for two creative people, those were baren walls.

2. During the convo, the older and younger gentleman have such different lighting on them, it feels like they're not even in the same room.

But overall... good work.

July 23, 2016 at 10:11PM

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Ethan
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