September 22, 2015 at 5:55AM

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Feedback needed on my first advertisement

Hey guys,

I just finished working on my first advertisement and I would love to get feedbacks from you.
I've been doing videos on my free time for a year now and getting feedbacks helps me focus on the main areas I need to improve on.
In case you have a couple of minutes, that would really be appreciated.
https://www.facebook.com/tootsweetapp/videos/447206482129440/

Cheers,
Julien

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