March 15, 2016 at 4:25PM, Edited March 15, 4:28PM
Feedback on Short Documentary
I recently asked the same question on my "Portrait of a Photographer" and got wonderful feedback that really helped me look at my short documentary from a different perspective and realize my strengths and weaknesses. I re-edited and tried to change all the feedback I received to make it better with what I had to work with. The sound mixing is definitely my weakest point, however, being a one man team for this project I had to try and pass off with sound mixing myself for the project.
Would greatly appreciate if I could have feedback on my piece and thoughts on if the re-edit helped make it better! Thanks.
Shot entirely on Nikon D7100
Sigma 17-50mm F/2.8 IS
Nikkor 85mm F/1.8
Nikkor 24mm F/2.8
Edited using Premiere Pro CC 2015
Original (lots of problems)