August 20, 2015 at 2:47AM

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Lady Hornet - A motorcycle story -

Hi, here a small doc shoot in natural light with Sony FS7 and 2 samyang lenses (24/50)

Original edit with french voice over :
https://vimeo.com/136376394

Music only edit:
https://vimeo.com/136484428

What do you think about ?

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Very nice look to it. I loved the shots of riding the bike way more than the character shots, which seemed a little out of place to me. ( not sure what computer shots were about )

August 20, 2015 at 9:00AM

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Guy McLoughlin
Video Producer
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Thanks Guy, perhaps if i put some subtitle it will help because, the guy speak about the creation of this custom moto. :)

August 21, 2015 at 5:35PM, Edited August 21, 5:35PM

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jc savelli
Director
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Nice video. The framing is nice, the use of the light too and nice sound recording. So the filmmaking part of video is good. The issue I have is more about what you show, when, I mean that I miss is to actually see the guy's work on the motocycle, there is only a few short close shot of the part he has modified and it doesn't allow to really see what he has done, if it was well done and if it change a lot the style of the motorcycle. I would expect to spend less time with him staring at the window and more time with the motorbike, more larger shot, aseptically from the side. The look of the color grading is nice but it may not be the best suited for this video as it doesn't show well the green colour cast, I understand the motocycle is green, I miss to see it.
You got everything good for filming, you just need to adapt more to the subject, it's an easy fix and your video will be way better. Good luck with your next projects, keep doing the good work !

August 23, 2015 at 8:54AM, Edited August 23, 8:54AM

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AvdS
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now that was awesome :)

January 3, 2016 at 6:23AM, Edited January 3, 6:23AM

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