February 8, 2016 at 5:42AM, Edited February 8, 5:58AM

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In need of some guidance and criticism about my work

Hi guys. I'm a spanish filmmaker based in Seoul currently, and this is my request to the NFS Community.

I'm not sure this is the right place to post this but I would love to show you all my work, including my last short film (which has to remain in a private link on youtube for festivals policies).
To tell the truth, everything I show in my website is done by myself. I always write, produce, direct and edit the whole thing basically and I feel stuck. I want to start doing things more serious but I would love to hear first the voice of the community. I think I might need some criticism or advice :)

Here is my website where you can see my first works: www.homelandfilms.com

And here you can see my last short film https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jWrlyRdO-DA
Remember, it must remain private!

Thank you for your time and for doing this. What an amazing place to share!!! :)

Best,

Gonzo.

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Cinematography is good in your show reel (homeland) but i would the say there are too many white walls which makes it look kind of boring. Add color if possible! Other than that very good.

February 8, 2016 at 12:34PM, Edited February 8, 12:36PM

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James Colitti
Director, DP, Writer, editor, Sound Designer, Cinimatographe
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Hello James! Thank you for your reply!
Actually is not my show reel the video that you saw on the main page of homelandfilms, is just the last video I edit for a project for an architect.

Still, I appreciate your honesty! I hope you watched my films as well. I think that speaks better about my work :)

Gonzo Torres

February 8, 2016 at 10:55PM, Edited February 8, 10:55PM

Really liked the short. Thought some of the cuts didn't work and the whole thing was very flat and not graded. I thought it was very interesting in terms of story and cinematography was good. My only advice are some of the cuts and the grade.

February 10, 2016 at 3:01PM

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