Writing a screenplay takes a lot of time, energy, caffeine and self-flagellation. Before you start writing, you need to know if your story idea is going to work with an audience. That means you need to pitch it and get feedback. While someday we hope to have a producer's undivided attention hanging on every word we say, we need to find an audience for our pitches now before we waste a lot of self-flagellation on a script that nobody wants to read. Friends are good for listening to pitches (they watch movies, right?), but fellow writers are even better if you can find them. Say hello to Logline It! - the world's only site dedicated to loglines for film (according to their motto). Here are the details on how it works:
After registering on Logline It!, writers can post their loglines. For the uninitiated, a logline is a one-sentence pitch for your story idea (Logline It! has a nice summary of the key elements of a logline). The site asks that each user review at least two loglines for every logline he or she posts. Since everybody has time to read one sentence, reading and commenting on two loglines is an incredibly low price to pay to get feedback on your own logline.
Once you have received multiple comments on your logline, you pick the most helpful comment, awarding that user brownie points. That makes the user feel super awesome for the day, and hence more likely to comment on future loglines.
Each week, the Judges comment on selected loglines. The Judges are a panel of filmmakers and screenwriters connected with The Story Department, a blog dedicated to the craft of screenwriting written by Karel Segers, who also runs Logline It!
Got a logline you need to test? Want to see how others pitch their stories? Check out Logline It! And don't forget to share with the NFS community how you approach loglines and pitches in the Comments section.
For a little over two hours, I was glued to my seat in the AMC Century City, fascinated and entralled in the world of the tennis dramaChallengers.
This masterful movie, directed by Luca Guadagnino and starring Zendaya, Mike Faist, and Josh O'Connor, is sexy, unflinching, and leaves audiences pondering its final moments.
The film, filled with flashbacks and unspoken emotions, culminates in a high-stakes match between childhood friends Art and Patrick, vying for a win that transcends the scoreboard. But the true victory, the movie suggests, lies elsewhere.
Let's explore.
Spoilers for the movie Challengers to come...
Challengers Movie Summary
In the movie Challengers, Tashi, a former tennis star turned coach, sees her husband Art, a once-dominant professional player, sinking into a slump.
Seeking to restore his fire, she enters him in a low-level "Challenger" tournament, expecting easy wins. However, her plan unravels when Art faces his estranged childhood friend and Tashi's ex-boyfriend, Patrick, whose own career has fizzled into mediocrity.
This unexpected reunion throws the trio's intertwined past into stark relief, revealing a history of intense friendship, youthful ambition, romantic entanglements, and unspoken betrayals.
As flashbacks weave through the present, Challengers explores the fragility of male friendship, particularly when fueled by competition, ambition, and a shared love for the same woman.
These flashbacks also expose the sacrifices Tashi made when her promising tennis career was cut short by injury. And how Art took care of her, and married her. But her passion for Patrick still burned hot, and their love triangle got even more complicated.
The focus of the film culminates in the climactic match between Art and Patrick. This battle transcends sport—it becomes a raw, physical confrontation with a past they cannot outrun.
In the final frames, they're playing a tie breaker, going back and forth.
So what happens next?
Challengers Ending Explained
Director Luca Guadagnino opts for an ambiguous ending, leaving the final point of the match unseen.
Art, fueled by a revelation of past betrayal, unleashes his fury on the court.
Patrick, seeking redemption, battles back.
The tension reaches a fever pitch as Art lunges for a final shot, colliding with Patrick in a tangle of limbs as he dives over the actual net and into his arms.
This isn't just a tennis maneuver; it's a physical manifestation of their complex bond.
And it symbolizes the reuniting of their friendship.
Their embrace is open to interpretation, but my take is that it hints at a long-awaited forgiveness. Art and Patrick, despite years of estrangement, may be rediscovering a connection forged on the tennis courts of their youth.
Of course, this could be more complicated since Tashi has recently slept with Patrick, but maybe not.
Tashi adds another layer to the ending. Is her enthusiastic cheer a sign of renewed passion for the game, or is it fueled by the raw emotion displayed on the court?
Her future with Art remains uncertain. She respects him as a father but wants him to want to be a tennis player, the thing that was taken away from her.
In the final scene, they are finally communicating, not with words, but through the language of the game that brought them together.
Whether Art emerges victorious, or Patrick claims his comeback, is ultimately irrelevant. The ending of Challengers is a dance of forgiveness, a tentative step towards healing old wounds. And perhaps, that's the most satisfying victory of all.
Guadagnino told Entertainment Weekly he kept the winner ambiguous on purpose: "I needed to get this very, very visually amped up and really immersed for the audience to understand how much it meant for them not to win over the other, but to be back together, all of them."
The question of which guy Tashi chooses at the end is also on the audience's mind.
Writer of the movie Justin Kuritzkes told Indie Wire “I chose to end the movie where I ended the movie, and I chose to end it there because for me, the movie is over. For me, what’s going on with these people has resolved in some way that’s satisfying enough for me. And I always want to start a movie as late as possible and end a movie as early as possible. So for me, I got what I needed by then, and I feel like they did too.”
Challengers is a film that lingers, like the echo of a well-struck ball. It doesn't offer easy answers, preferring to explore the complexities of human connection and the weight of the past.
Whether Art or Patrick ultimately triumphed on the court is less important than the journey they took to reach that point, a journey that may forever change the dynamics of their tangled relationship with Tashi.
Is tennis the ultimate key to forgiveness? Let me know what you think in the comments.