September 18, 2013

Destin Cretton Expands His Short & Changes Protagonists for His Feature 'Short Term 12'

Short Term 12 Destin Cretton interviewRecently here on NFS, we have written about the strategies of making a short in the hopes of leading to a feature and making a teaser before shooting the feature to build an audience and generate interest. Sometimes, however, a short is made to be a short, and only after acclaim garnered from various film festivals and critics does a filmmaker consider the possibility of expanding it into a feature film. Such is the case of Short Term 12, a feature-length film written and directed by Destin Cretton from his Academy Nicholl Fellowship winning screenplay, which was based on a film school thesis he never intended to make as a feature. Check out a short vignette on Cretton, as well as an interview with the writer/director to learn more about his personal journey and how his critically acclaimed short became a critically acclaimed feature.

First, let's check out the trailer for Short Term 12, now playing in limited release in the U.S.:

Short Term 12 was originally a short film Destin Cretton made for his thesis project for his Masters film program at San Diego State University, which was based on his own experiences of working in a short-term group home for youth. The short won the Jury Prize in Short Filmmaking at Sundance in 2009. Cretton eventually decided to expand the short into a feature-length screenplay, but struggled to stretch the original story. He decided to change the protagonist from a male to a female, and that change opened up new ideas for the feature-length story.

Cretton's feature-length screenplay for Short Term 12 won the Academy Nicholl Fellowship in 2010, but the filmmaker didn't jump right in to make the film. Instead, he used the $30,000 fellowship award to make I Am Not a Hipster, based on his Nicholl Fellowship year script. Only after that experience was Cretton ready to tackle Short Term 12 as a feature. Oddly enough, despite both the short's success and the premiere of Hipster at Sundance, the feature-length version of Short Term 12 was not accepted at Sundance this year. Instead, the film premiered at SXSW, where it won the Grand Jury Prize and the Audience Award, and continues to win awards at film festivals as critics rave about the film and the powerful, naturalistic performances.

Here's a short vignette about Cretton and his film from the good folks at the San Francisco Film Society. (Note: the film clip from Short Term 12 in this video has NSFW language.):

And here's a short interview with Cretton from All the Way with Alloway that covers the backstory of the writer/director's personal experiences and journey to make the film. Please note: the audio on this video is bad, but if you can tune out the background noise, the actual content of the interview tells the story behind the story quite well:

Short Term 12 is a great example of "write what you know," but I also think the story in the feature film is a good lesson for aspiring screenwriters about how to put some distance between your personal experiences and the screenplay you are writing. Switching the protagonist from male to female gives Cretton the opportunity to explore his personal story from a fresh perspective, one that I imagine also offered the writer/director some objectivity on a very personal experience.

In my own writing, I recognize that all of my characters are essentially a part of me. I realize I need to infuse my characters with flaws and have them make mistakes so my screenplays don't spiral down into solipsism. Yet, I need to relate to the emotional core of the stories that I write. I find that I need to write characters that are different from me in their natures and actions but to whom I can still relate emotionally. Like Cretton changing his short film protagonist from male to female for the feature-length story, I have discovered that writing stories about female protagonists certainly helps me in this regard.

If you're lucky enough to live in a town that is showing Short Term 12, make sure to check out this film for yourself. You can check the film's website to see if your town has been added to the platform release schedule.

How have your personal experiences and emotional journeys influenced your screenwriting? How do you create enough emotional distance between yourself and your characters to give yourself perspective on your own screenplays? Share your thoughts with us in the comments.

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I've always kinda felt screenwriting competitions were...well useless. But $30k is a lot of money.

September 18, 2013 at 5:32PM, Edited September 4, 11:21AM

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Looks like a good movie.

September 18, 2013 at 11:33PM, Edited September 4, 11:21AM

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Ian B

I worked a few days on "I am not a Hipster" helping out the producer of that and Short term Ron. I just saw Short Term at the archlight in LA and I thought it was really good, the writing was great and the lead casting was awesome. Great film!

September 19, 2013 at 3:12AM, Edited September 4, 11:21AM

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This looks dull as dishwater.

September 19, 2013 at 5:18AM, Edited September 4, 11:21AM

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Heyzeus

Are his short films available online?

September 19, 2013 at 1:38PM, Edited September 4, 11:21AM

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RJ Blooks

This movies was fantastic. One of my top 2 for the year so far. Trailer doesn't do it justice.

September 23, 2013 at 2:16PM, Edited September 4, 11:21AM

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Damn, I want to see this again! I saw it twice in it's first week and a half, but had to drive some distance to get to it. Definitely one of the best movies of the year, IMO. I hope everyone involved gets the recognition they deserve, including Destin and Brie come Oscar-time. Marcus' rap (not the one in the trailer) is utterly heartbreaking, as are other parts.

September 23, 2013 at 9:34PM, Edited September 4, 11:21AM

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September 26, 2013 at 11:00AM, Edited September 4, 11:21AM

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